Happy July!
Although summer time usually includes a vacation for many, for me, I am
gearing up with the illustrations for my new book. This July it is THE MERMAID
AND THE THREE OCTOPUS. Every month I pause for a time to talk about where I am
in the process of my book in hopes that you may share my interest in creating
books and drawings for children.
What I've accomplished so far is a retelling of the classic Goldilocks and
the Three Bears story, and I've created cartoon-like illustrations in a 32 page
book dummy. I completed the dummy and then went back and reworked the ending,
changing the images after completing the first version. I wanted a final spread
showing the mermaid with her new and old friends swimming away through the
beautiful coral reefs. But to get the full effect of the undersea gardens I
wanted a double page spread. The book actually ends on a single page. For the
last page, page32, I show a happy ending for the octopus family, especially baby
octopus who after a big commotion and confrontation finds herself with a gift
from the mermaid, a beautiful pearl and coral tiara. The beauty of working on a
dummy is the ability to change things when they become clear In the language of
pictures, before too much time is spent on the finished spreads. I make the
dummy with typing paper cut to about 2/3rds the size of the trim dimensions in
the actual book. The trim size is one of the first things I, the editor, and the
art director, decide on. Since I have done two "Goldilocks" books in the past
each with a different trim size, I chose a size that would leave room for my
border idea. In the original story the three bears go for a walk while their
porridge cools. In my undersea version they go for a stroll but the baby octopus
is unhappy because her parents make her wear a peculiar and she thinks, ugly,
hat. In the borders she tries to lose the hat. That makes it an especially happy
ending when the baby octopus ends up with a gift from the mermaid, a beautiful
tiara. I find that children enjoy a little humor and I am hoping they will think
its funny that the baby octopus is given a live hat.
I have always loved porcupine fish. They remind me of ocean going
hedgehogs. It seemed natural that the mermaid would be traveling with a friend,
and that the friend could move the story forward by prickling the grumpy
octopus. I had to walk a fine line between making the octopus mad by having
their things eaten and played with and just being curious. The funny looking
porcupine fish makes the scenes kind of funny. I have a reference book called
FISHFACE and it is full of very expressive fish faces, although its anybodies
guess what the fish are really thinking. I have been to the New England Aquarium
twice since starting my book, and it is easy to get lost in the world of fish in
the central tank, and in the reef fish exhibit. Sometimes I am amazed I have a
job where its important to look at fish! The trouble is like iridescent birds,
it's impossible to capture their beauty. I have an invitation to see the
aquarium?s octopus from the aquararist's side but a date hasn't materialized
yet. I have seen Anna the octopus twice from the public's side, but she is
remaining very shy. Apparently octopus have very individual personalities, and
for now, Anna is settling in. I'm very glad I saw a baby octopus in the wild in
Okinawa while snorkeling. It was right beside a baby Lionfish. That is a
beautiful but venomous fish that lives in the coral reefs in Okinawa. When
reading the hard to find but wonderful A DIVER?S SCRAPBOOK by John Chandler he
remarks that if a sea creature does not move away from you, ask yourself, "Maybe
it doesn?t have to?" Luckily when I went snorkeling my son in law gave me
booties and gloves along with the advice not to poke anything.
The fun part of painting the illustrations is reliving my underwater
experiences, although they were fewer than I would have wished, knowing what I
know now. Two of the adjustments I have had to make are how everything is almost
weightless, as in the mermaid's hair and how almost every view fades into deep
blue. The other adjustment must be utilized in painting the fish. Almost every
fish guide show the fish from the side, while in reality they are seen in all
perspectives. Add to that, many sea creatures are iridescent and some, like the
octopus change color and shape plus some are see-through!
Because I set my story in Japan I am very glad I lugged back lots of big
colorful books about that culture. My story is set in the olden days, so I rely
on art books too. On the twelve or so trips I've taken to Japan I have brought
back toys, antique printed indigo cloth and folk art. If anyone has visited
Japan they will recognize lots of references to Japanese culture. The octopus
wear kimonos and Okinawan hats (except for Baby). Even the seashells and coral
shards found on the beach I brought home have found their way into my pictures.
Even if the child knows nothing about Japan, it is nice to think their frame of
reference has widened a bit. I think that is why as a child I loved reading THE
JUNGLE BOOK about India, ALADDIN AND THE MAGIC LAMP about Persia and THE STORY
ABOUT PING set in China.
Happy armchair traveling, or even better, the real thing!
Your friend, Jan Brett